I suggest you write by planning story using a story board to outline the flow, then filling in sections, finally editing for consistency, grammar and spelling
1/10 for story, + 2/10 for potential, + 1/10 for your audacity to publishJAMES ROTHERYReport 2011-06-06 17:09:40fucking shit this story is not incest its fucking lameAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-16 01:20:18i dont get it is this a joke. XNXX Sex 2 your bare feet are squeezing her neck – again WTF? 2 your bare feet are squeezing her neck – again WTF? ive 6’5 and im about 280 lbs. But other then that this story is lame.«12» 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-26 09:22:49So you get turned on (mildly) by:
1 the fact she is fit – WTF? ive 6’5 and im about 280 lbs. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-26 09:22:49So you get turned on (mildly) by:
1 the fact she is fit – WTF?
