calm down and read the story a few times before postinganonymous readerReport 2011-02-03 05:27:10draaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggeeedddd it out too long. XNXX Starting off, to me it was so confusing, I didn’t even get deep into the story. Who is Kurk? Who is Kurk? 6 comments«12»Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-15 20:47:56I think you need to better identify & develop characters. Read.”mypenname3000, Tina Kerr 36, Louderthansound, to name a few to get the feel of what I’m trying to say to help you write better (for my slow mind). 1st comment incomplete!!!Dudley DowrongReport 2018-06-15 20:22:16I think you need to better identify & develop characters. calm down and read the story a few times before postinganonymous readerReport 2011-02-03 05:27:10draaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaggggggeeedddd it out too long. You drained yourself telling the first part of the story so there was nothing left for the sweet part.«12»
