Other then that good job.«1» It also ends aburptly which you should fix. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2004-09-24 09:05:37I liked itREADERReport 2004-08-31 02:51:13That was pretty good but it needs to be longer. XNXX 2 comments«1»READERReport 2004-09-24 09:05:37I liked itREADERReport 2004-08-31 02:51:13That was pretty good but it needs to be longer. You need to add more detail. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2004-09-24 09:05:37I liked itREADERReport 2004-08-31 02:51:13That was pretty good but it needs to be longer. It also ends aburptly which you should fix. It also ends aburptly which you should fix. You need to add more detail. Other then that good job.«1» It also ends aburptly which you should fix. Other then that good job.«1» It also ends aburptly which you should fix. It also ends aburptly which you should fix. You need to add more detail. 2 comments«1»READERReport 2004-09-24 09:05:37I liked itREADERReport 2004-08-31 02:51:13That was pretty good but it needs to be longer.
