19 comments«1234»borotaReport 2019-01-30 15:46:11The last comment,IS SIMPLY A MESS!There are NO “DEIONS” in this story and NOBODY COULD UNDERSTAND ANYTHING from those words:”had more impact as interjected rather than at the 1st of the story”!THINK A LITTLE before writing something and TRY AT LEAST TO MAKE SOME SENSE of what you are saying!Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-26 13:19:58If I could vote, it would be positive. ? XNXX Background was given as necessary & had more impact as interjected rather than at the 1st of the story. I loved it! Background was given as necessary & had more impact as interjected rather than at the 1st of the story. Do get some editorial help with your stories!«1234» 19 comments«1234»borotaReport 2019-01-30 15:46:11The last comment,IS SIMPLY A MESS!There are NO “DEIONS” in this story and NOBODY COULD UNDERSTAND ANYTHING from those words:”had more impact as interjected rather than at the 1st of the story”!THINK A LITTLE before writing something and TRY AT LEAST TO
