i love these stories and the other guy just kinda stopped half way thru. I know that all that sAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-17 10:17:52i can say alot of things, but i dont need to this story speakes for itselfhappy readerReport 2008-06-17 00:56:30all i can say is amen to u man. XNXX.Com The idea of the story is good, and I applaud anyone willing to complete a story that has stopped before it was finished, but in my opinion it needs a lot of work to live up to its potential. There obviously needed to be a change in Narcissa and Belatrix but their basic natures have been lost, which makes the whole point of the story rather redundant. There obviously needed to be a change in Narcissa and Belatrix but their basic natures have been lost, which makes the whole point of the story rather redundant.
