Your grammar and punctuation could definitely use some work, though. looking forward to part 3Witchy WomanReport 2018-01-14 05:19:43Great story. XNXX Video You should write more chapters. Great story, just needs a little help being more readable.mr longfelloReport 2017-08-11 20:21:23Hot storyAnonymous readerReport 2016-07-19 13:55:33oh!..my god…that was fucking cool..I cum two times already.«1234» Your grammar and punctuation could definitely use some work, though. It’s only important because it makes it a little more difficult to read. Your grammar and punctuation could definitely use some work, though. You kept switching between past-tense and present-tense and most sentences weren’t correctly punctuated. 17 comments«1234»Douglas WiseReport 2021-09-19 20:15:44love it so far very hot looking forward to the next chapterbuggy69Report 2020-11-08 12:35:25superb story. You kept switching between past-tense and present-tense and most sentences weren’t correctly punctuated. Your grammar and punctuation could definitely use some work, though.
