I look forward to see what you do with your characters in the next chapter.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-15 07:48:15haha love ur writing style 😀
-Awkward. XNXX.Com so just some minor criticism. I look forward to see what you do with your characters in the next chapter.anonymous readerReport 2012-12-15 07:48:15haha love ur writing style 😀
-Awkward. 9 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-06-25 16:35:49Well ”almost” no spelling mistakes. ”Eachother” can be spelled as one word. ”High school” is two words. ”Of course” is two words. ”then climbed up on to my lap.” Otherwise this was a really great story. ”High school” is two words. ”Eachother” can be spelled as one word. But I’ve never seen it used anywhere, other than here. 😀 😀 😀 great!anonymous readerReport 2012-08-26 13:45:13Oh my god, you are a fantastic author.
