Very few spelling and punctuation errors. However. Xxx video Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. Terrificly written. Terrificly written. However. Looking forward to seeing many more from you.«1» Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? However. However. I do think that the girl broke a little too easy. Terrificly written. Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes? Very few spelling and punctuation errors. Even someone who is submissive I dont think would break so easy. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-25 02:05:54Its a great story. Just my oppinion but something you may consider in future stories yes?
