keep writing though, i want to see what else happens«12» one tip is try to make the characters, like Sirius, more like themselves from the book. XNXX.Com Keep it up!READERReport 2007-07-31 08:30:57This is a good sotry. Keep it up!READERReport 2007-07-31 08:30:57This is a good sotry. I cant wait for the next one! 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-06-16 04:11:56good story! and hurry with the next one.READERReport 2005-09-17 17:10:16good but the kick ass take names is john cena’s the pro wrestlerREADERReport 2005-08-28 16:59:06more more moreREADERReport 2005-08-12 23:35:58to tell the truth, the actual idea of the story is totally awsome, but your writing isn’t all that great, sorry just telling the truth. keep writing though, i want to see what else happens«12» Keep it up!READERReport 2007-07-31 08:30:57This is a good sotry. i loved it keep it up. Keep it up!READERReport 2007-07-31 08:30:57This is a good sotry.
