But still like I said, a great story 10/10«1» And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. Xxx video Detail matters. With not much detail. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly. And I agree with the other comment about being a virgin thing. It felt like you were just listing everything that happened. But 1 thing is you said she was a virgin so no matter she would have felt pain when that guy rammed his dick in her pussy. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2010-09-06 11:10:21It would have been an alright story line if u knew how to write properly. There was no flow to the story. It felt like you were just listing everything that happened. Also, think about continuity and having even a fantasy make sense.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-25 21:42:31Pretty great story.
