i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. Grammar is still shit. XXX you don’t have very many mistakes at all! too many grammar mistakes for my taste. ^_^ good plot line though.READERReport 2007-10-13 10:38:09Thanks I copied and pasted it to word to use spell check!READERReport 2007-10-12 10:43:22you have gotten so much better! 910«12» I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions? Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… Anything you want to see from any of the characters?READERReport 2007-10-20 00:16:14meh, it was okay… 910«12» i really liked it and usually i can’t stand these kind of stories. I suggest proof reading it before you publish it.READERReport 2007-10-21 12:31:12I’m working on a second, any tips suggestions?
