Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. XXX 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise. Also remember quotation marks, those make it easier to read and know what is dialogue and what is not. I would recommend you fix grammar, spelling, and indenting if you are wanting to write more stories. But like I said, the content was great.«1» 2 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-06-29 03:15:42Paragraphs please and learn to spell.cs1177Report 2009-06-24 23:50:13Not a terrible story content-wise. That story is what can be called a “wall of text” and can be hard to read. I would recommend you fix grammar, spelling, and indenting if you are wanting to write more stories. But like I said, the content was great.«1» I would recommend you fix grammar, spelling, and indenting if you are wanting to write more stories.
