7 comments«12»wardgsavenReport 2020-11-28 01:35:11I realize that the story was written years ago, but the changes I talked about would make it so much easier to read. XNXX Sex Awful!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-08-27 00:50:40Your writing is kinda awkward . But good story line«12» 隶通缉Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-20 00:19:53definitely NOT the best work that you have done, but readable at the least,,, good plot,, but I think you should rewrite it in a more mature wayanonymous readerReport 2013-10-24 16:46:34zXrqlU Im thankful for the blog post.Thanks Again. 隶通缉Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-20 00:19:53definitely NOT the best work that you have done, but readable at the least,,, good plot,, but I think you should rewrite it in a more mature wayanonymous readerReport 2013-10-24 16:46:34zXrqlU Im thankful for the blog post.Thanks Again. I don’t know if you have written anything recently, as I would certainly be interested in reading it. But good story line«12» 隶通缉Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-20 00:19:53definitely NOT the best work that you have done, but readable at the least,,, good plot,,
