Please keep writing, but try to expand with more detail!anonymous readerReport 2012-04-23 04:12:45I FUCKIN LOVE IT YOU’RE AFUCKIN GENIUSanonymous readerReport 2012-04-23 04:12:15I FUCKIN LOVE IT YOU’RE AFUCKIN GENIUSanonymous readerReport 2012-04-22 12:57:18they need to be longer and this is very weird.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-15 22:43:11make next one longer this is good just maker next one longer with more action and make the kid stand up for himself«1» I picture what I’m reading in my head, like watching a movie in my mind. XXX Please keep writing, but try to expand with more detail!anonymous readerReport 2012-04-23 04:12:45I FUCKIN LOVE IT YOU’RE AFUCKIN GENIUSanonymous readerReport 2012-04-23 04:12:15I FUCKIN LOVE IT YOU’RE AFUCKIN GENIUSanonymous readerReport 2012-04-22 12:57:18they need to be longer and this is very weird.anonymous readerReport 2012-04-15 22:43:11make next one longer this is good just maker next one longer with more action and make the kid stand up for himself«1» Other than what I stated above; your story flows very well and it has an excellent plot.
