Fantastic job and I am looking forward to what may follow.«12345» 49 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2015-11-23 11:34:19Fine story from a writer learning his craft; he is not helped by fuckwits telling him it was boring, maybe they are too occupied searching for the “gravy stroke” to be able to see anything else.Yes, you need to proof-read and use an editor, but starting out is the main thing, you have to make those steps. XNXX Video I look forward to reading more of your work.Anonymous readerReport 2015-11-20 19:13:16Absolutely amazing story, plenty of emotion, love it!!Anonymous readerReport 2015-10-30 07:28:53YOU REALLY NEED TO MAKE ANOTHER PART IN THE SERIES BUT MORE ACTION!!!Anonymous readerReport 2015-09-13 08:18:34thanksRedbeard1031Report 2015-05-24 15:15:30I finally got around to reading this chapter. 49 comments«12345»Anonymous readerReport 2015-11-23 11:34:19Fine story from a writer learning his craft; he is not helped by fuckwits telling him it was boring, maybe they are too occupied searching for the “gravy stroke” to be able to see anything else.Yes, you need to
