It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1» It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1» It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1» It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like where this story is headed, but please run it thru spell and grammar checks, and divide up that giant paragraph.«1» It captain not caption and the spelling mistakes make it hard to readDKoontzReport 2011-10-10 11:27:58i like
