Yes you should keep on writing. XNXX I know this is your first story here and hope you don’t give up. It appears that you have promise. Short paragraphs with a double space between them really makes a story much easier to read. You did fairly well though, at least you didn’t put the entire thing into one WALL of print. Short paragraphs with a double space between them really makes a story much easier to read. Thanks for the entertainment.«1» It appears that you have promise. Lainiedonb9033Report 2010-03-23 00:29:36Sweetie, it’s a very, very hot story, but you should check out some other stories on this site to look at format. Lainiedonb9033Report 2010-03-23 00:29:36Sweetie, it’s a very, very hot story, but you should check out some other stories on this site to look at format. Many people will not even look at a story once they see that.
