My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for example hearin or hearing. XNXX Video I shall keep reading your seriesanonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 04:43:45Great story, really enjoying the series. one small critique. Everything else was great. I like a story that explains the whole picture, so leaving out big details like this lessens the experience for me. My one wish would be for you to stop ending words with an apostrophe, but write either for example hearin or hearing. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-02-14 01:18:28good work. Everything else was great. Might be just me tho!anonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 00:40:03ANOTHER GREAT PART WELL WRITTI=EN AND THE STORY IS SOGOOD KEEP THE SERIES GOING
;; JJ«1» I like a story that explains the whole picture, so leaving out big details like this lessens the experience for me. Everything else was great. I shall keep reading your seriesanonymous readerReport 2011-11-29 04:43:45Great story, really enjoying the series.
