61 comments«12345»X-MAN215Report 2021-01-16 04:09:47THX LUV ITAnonymous readerReport 2016-08-06 18:18:49Great story!!!Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-14 04:14:29I find there are issues with spelling, grammar and word choice. XNXX.Com …but not enough to fret over, just would suggest having a proofreader/editor for your future efforts… 61 comments«12345»X-MAN215Report 2021-01-16 04:09:47THX LUV ITAnonymous readerReport 2016-08-06 18:18:49Great story!!!Anonymous readerReport 2016-07-14 04:14:29I find there are issues with spelling, grammar and word choice. …but not enough to fret over, just would suggest having a proofreader/editor for your future efforts… But in the future, try to be careful about confusing things like names…bad spelling and grammar I can forgive, but a sudden name change has me wondering what I missed or if this was just some cobbled up cut-n-paste effort plagiarized from another site. But in the future, try to be careful about confusing things like names…bad spelling and grammar I can forgive, but a sudden name change has me wondering what I missed or if this was just some cobbled up cut-n-paste effort plagiarized
