If you are going to write, learn about what constitutes good writing. XNXX PLEASE learn how to proofread you stuff BEFORE dumping onto this site. You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before. This one is so poorly written that I stopped after a few paragraphs. This one is so poorly written that I stopped after a few paragraphs. You still have a few mistakes, but it’s still good.«1» If is NOT just a bunch of printed words. If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you. You still have a few mistakes, but it’s still good.«1» This one is so poorly written that I stopped after a few paragraphs. You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before. You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before.
