One comment above talks about latter chapters not meshing with the previous yet if their time was condensed then they would have experimented in other forms of satisfaction and pleasure. I’m not beating up on the writer; my comments, to be perfectly frank and honest, is only for the purpose of constructive criticism–not to degrade nor diminish the story nor the writer!! XNXX As I commented three years ago, after reading the first time, the story context and to some extent even the subject, appears for the most part to have no connection to the previous two segments! One comment above talks about latter chapters not meshing with the previous yet if their time was condensed then they would have experimented in other forms of satisfaction and pleasure.
