It makes it easier for the reader to follow a story.«12» One suggestion though, split the paragraphs with a line break between them. XXX It makes it easier for the reader to follow a story.«12» Thank you.Anonymous readerReport 2009-05-03 17:40:27Very good…made me cum. One suggestion though, split the paragraphs with a line break between them. I agree with the line break, especially if your next story is longer, it will make it easier to read.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-12 04:49:44it was good. needs to be a little longer on the sexual part..Vanion_3000Report 2009-03-01 20:35:03For a first attempt, well done. needs to be a little longer on the sexual part..Vanion_3000Report 2009-03-01 20:35:03For a first attempt, well done. It makes it easier for the reader to follow a story.«12» I agree with the line break, especially if your next story is longer, it will make it easier to read.Anonymous readerReport 2009-03-12 04:49:44it was good.
