I really read stories mostly for the story line. XNXX I really read stories mostly for the story line. Learn to proofread and edit your stuff BEFORE posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 09:52:23good story cant wait for the next chapter.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 18:31:51go away pervert below!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 08:10:03Nice story. 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-10-03 20:58:18Way, way too many misspelled words. Can make them a little longer though.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 06:02:22Nice work dude I m waiting for more;)«12» Are the characters Amish? Learn to proofread and edit your stuff BEFORE posting.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 09:52:23good story cant wait for the next chapter.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 18:31:51go away pervert below!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-27 08:10:03Nice story. What does “ye” mean? What does “ye” mean? I really read stories mostly for the story line.
