Amazing ending; “wondered when her …home.” Teehee. Just a bit more work needed otherwise good.«12345» A good story, but it lacks thoroughness and explanations.jhm828Report 2015-07-23 21:06:39Yes enjoyed the story, would like to see part with the brother and the horse.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-02 03:05:16This was a great sketch! XNXX And it was just the right length to reveal a sketch of a situation.Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-31 22:43:25your story is good details were good only thing that was a draw back was it was too briefAnonymous readerReport 2014-12-18 19:16:45Loved all the sex scene should started with the stallion giving it to her. That would have been a great start. That he felt himself familiar and entitled enough with her to use sex (forced) in a bargain, now that was pretty well done. And it was just the right length to reveal a sketch of a situation.Anonymous readerReport 2014-12-31 22:43:25your story is good details were good only thing that was a draw back was it
