It is a great story but please do a grammar check and read some books on writing techniques for short stories.., All in all, its a 9 on storyline and a 3 on grammar. Next, too much forensic evidence, even a mall cop could find your main character. Sex video Fuck im so horny i want my fuck holes used and abusedanonymous readerReport 2011-10-27 12:56:18Alright alright alright that’s eaxtcly what I needed!anonymous readerReport 2010-08-12 03:34:06I agree! Next, too much forensic evidence, even a mall cop could find your main character. I got so wet.Anonymous readerReport 2010-06-01 21:52:37So damn hot. 20 comments«1234»xtremejumpReport 2011-12-16 02:29:00I gave you a pos rating for plot, and tags, if you other assholes read this shit, don’t be hypocrites, you are into the stuff. (exaggerating a bit) I hope your next part is better.anonymous readerReport 2011-11-23 05:42:13Fuck yes , luv the brutetality , take what u want .
