You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst. Limit the use of adverbs as well. Sex video Expand your skills and keep writing.DragonheartReport 2008-10-01 18:31:44″The cloudless sun beat down unmerciful on the somber gathered contingency”
“fresh dug plot”
“No no, he had no intention..”
“plowed her slit with gusto”
“strawberry tipped tits? You are prone to flowery verse that reminds me of Early O’Henry at his worst. The ones ending in “ly” should be limiter even more than the others. You have a vivid imagination and a fine grasp of the English language. The ones ending in “ly” should be limiter even more than the others. The racial stuff might be better handled without the tags like mulatto. One last thought. Otherwise just use the period and say, “She was excited,” or show it with a description of your actions.
