Some writing tips:
Go for an open setting and try to keep the characters believable. XXX I know some will get pissed off that there’s no translations: Just as the writer wanted the rest of the family to feel, LOL! I hope you give it a twist instead of just “bang sisters, all romantic with juliet, story out”. Like the style, well written with good English. Too bad. (Just be aware that others might think you are really weird in doing that!)Anonymous readerReport 2014-01-06 06:58:07great story looking forward to part 3Anonymous readerReport 2013-12-24 23:36:54Great story. I hope you give it a twist instead of just “bang sisters, all romantic with juliet, story out”. I suggest you write a description of the personalities of your characters and a small bio (it’s not necessary for the main character) and then stick to it.
