ready for part 2!!«1» He takes off his shorts and underwear at the water fountain, but then coach orders him to strip or he’ll do it himself. Poor grammar and punctuation, loads of sentence fragments and a completely unrealistic scenario. XXX Poor grammar and punctuation, loads of sentence fragments and a completely unrealistic scenario. Oh, please.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-22 21:46:05good so far. Oh, please.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-22 21:46:05good so far. Has great potential and i like the whole “kidnapping/ obsession” theme, can’t wait for the next chapter, please post it soon, thx :)palmer69Report 2012-11-24 16:45:36Great story, hope he brings some of those little league players that he coaches home as well.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-23 18:49:17I’m confused. If he’s already naked, why say that? 5 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2014-11-13 03:42:31Hey, I’m a fifteen year old boy looking for a older man or woman to tell me what to do, I can’t take pictures but I’d love to chatanonymous readerReport 2012-11-30 23:55:18I love it.
