But with the second part you should develop the relationship a bit. All and all ill give it a 4/5. XNXX Sex The twist was pretty good especially with her name but sort of saw it comming, but i didnt really care as it was a really good story. Bring on part 2!Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-05 10:43:53You HAVE to make a chapter 2. But with the second part you should develop the relationship a bit. 10 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2010-04-25 23:29:26Amazing story! The twist was pretty good especially with her name but sort of saw it comming, but i didnt really care as it was a really good story. The twist was pretty good especially with her name but sort of saw it comming, but i didnt really care as it was a really good story. I hope u write a 2nd one.Anonymous readerReport 2009-11-27 10:58:18The switching between first and third person was a little confusing at first, but wasnt that bad.
