Second, to all the grammar and spelling critics: your comments amuse me. I enjoy it all. XXX It’s a sex scene for fuck’s sake. =]READERReport 2008-01-18 17:41:23well going over it i dont even see very many spelling errors, at least compared to some stories I have read. And if it really bothers you so god damn much, copy it to word and fix it yourself before reading. I think you did a great job. And if it really bothers you so god damn much, copy it to word and fix it yourself before reading. It’s a sex scene for fuck’s sake. I think you did a great job. I ish waiting eagerly. Are you a teacher? Still enjoyed reading it though, just keep it in mind please? And if it really bothers you so god damn much, copy it to word and fix it yourself before reading.
