Descriptive is good but you went way too far. Watch your excessive use of commas – you inserted some where they did not belong. XXX Watch your excessive use of commas – you inserted some where they did not belong. Watch your excessive use of commas – you inserted some where they did not belong. You tried to fill every sentence with as many words as you could – as if you were being paid by the word. Descriptive is good but you went way too far. Descriptive is good but you went way too far. Descriptive is good but you went way too far. Descriptive is good but you went way too far. Watch your excessive use of commas – you inserted some where they did not belong.
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Aletta Ocean
