This, like so many other stories, coulda been a contender.Fix’mReport 2011-04-26 17:28:07After reading the first story I thought that this fledgling series had potential, but after reading the second I have to admit that I was wrong. Xxx video The characters are less real than if you added flying unicorns and talking butterflys. In order to make a good story, you have to make characters we can relate to, sympathize with, root for or just plain want to see them get beat down. This, like so many other stories, coulda been a contender.Fix’mReport 2011-04-26 17:28:07After reading the first story I thought that this fledgling series had potential, but after reading the second I have to admit that I was wrong. 3 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-26 23:55:34i on the other hand disagree.
