keep posting, odds are you learn and get better 🙂
and hey short aint always bad! I always get off on stories that remind me of my own teenage experiences. XNXX 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-12-04 02:22:18yeah don’t take it personally. It’s a good story. Keep writing … THAT WAS A GOOD STORY… IGNORE THEM… THAT WAS A GOOD STORY… Keep writing … THAT WAS A GOOD STORY… ive written a lot on here and I gotta say, its short, but you did a pretty good job. at least you didn’t put too much in hahamrdixxxxReport 2013-11-28 06:37:06As the last guy says — Just ignore those assholes who come to this website just to make negative comments. =Panonymous readerReport 2013-11-24 08:40:10Holy shit your writing is dog shit.anonymous readerReport 2013-11-24 00:41:55suck monkey babboon balls, learn how to write 9yr old«1» ive written a lot on here and I gotta say, its short, but you did a pretty good job.
