If you want your readers to not flee in disgust when suddenly reality is violated, then state from the beginning that your character will be “super.” Otherwise, when you state it later it seems like a cheap cop out.«12» The basic premise of the story is actually decent. XXX My aim is to make you better. The basic premise of the story is actually decent. Stupidity and mediocrity continues to exist because we coddle the weak. The technical stuff like grammar, punctuation and credible detail writing can be had by asking your english teachers for some help.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-07 02:08:56starts off good. then reality breaks and stupidity sets in.kcrit42qReport 2012-10-04 23:34:29it was good but needs workanonymous readerReport 2012-10-04 23:08:13No.
