Good story honestly I need a part 3 plllllllllzanonymous readerReport 2010-12-11 02:50:30u say electric blue alot hahaanonymous readerReport 2010-12-11 02:50:22u say electric blue alot hahaAnonymous readerReport 2009-10-14 22:03:33you need to be more descriptive and space the lines out it was hard to read and the grammer was pretty bad you were missing words and misspelled quite a few but just focus on those and this could makea good series«1» Good story honestly I need a part 3 plllllllllzanonymous readerReport 2010-12-11 02:50:30u say electric blue alot hahaanonymous readerReport 2010-12-11 02:50:22u say electric blue alot hahaAnonymous readerReport 2009-10-14 22:03:33you need to be more descriptive and space the lines out it was hard to read and the grammer was pretty bad you were missing words and misspelled quite a few but just focus on those and this could makea good series«1»
