Not a critique more of an observation.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-24 23:42:07If I could vote, it would be positive, I think everything happened too fast. XNXX Sex Something like thatedmondlReport 2016-12-24 23:46:49I agree it could have been longer with a longer explanation of the sex acts it deserves another chapter at least I gave it a positive voteAnonymous readerReport 2016-10-20 16:34:29I got hard just reading thisAnonymous readerReport 2014-07-09 17:21:57A very short story but hot.«12345» Something like thatedmondlReport 2016-12-24 23:46:49I agree it could have been longer with a longer explanation of the sex acts it deserves another chapter at least I gave it a positive voteAnonymous readerReport 2016-10-20 16:34:29I got hard just reading thisAnonymous readerReport 2014-07-09 17:21:57A very short story but hot.«12345» Not a critique more of an observation.Dudley DowrongReport 2018-07-24 23:42:07If I could vote, it would be positive, I think everything happened too fast.
