hah and again…paragraphsAnonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 00:42:33paragraphs pleasefbaileyReport 2008-08-30 12:44:59You really need to use a spell checker and then you need to proofread your work before submitting it. XNXX Sex You need to use apostrophes. You need to use apostrophes. The letter i needs to be capitalized. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 22:06:45the plot is nice but I think u r missing details ! You need to use apostrophes. The letter i needs to be capitalized. its a good story I liked it.Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-01 13:36:15waaaaaaaaay toooooooooooo shoooooooorrrrrrrttttt!!!!!!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-08-31 22:21:19build up to it a little bit more…it seemed like one minute you had neighbors and next you were giving a blowjob? And as everyone else has told you, you need to use paragraphs too. You need to use apostrophes. What I did read was okay but I had to stop because it was just too hard to ignore all the little stuff.
