I found it hard to go with this story when I couldn’t decide what she looked like with the so little description you gave. Maybe try typing story into microsoft word then compy and paste.Anonymous readerReport 2009-12-04 01:46:48poorly written, and completely unbelievable. XXX Maybe try typing story into microsoft word then compy and paste.Anonymous readerReport 2009-12-04 01:46:48poorly written, and completely unbelievable. I found it hard to go with this story when I couldn’t decide what she looked like with the so little description you gave. but im probably one of the only ones.«12» it was perfect for a short little smut story. id say 6/10… What did the dress look like? Hair color and/or style? Hair color and/or style? love rape and bestialityAnonymous readerReport 2009-12-05 04:30:54good plot, but work on your formatting. I found it hard to go with this story when I couldn’t decide what she looked like with the so little description you gave.
